Friday, May 27, 2011

A Tune That Defined Love.


He played their favourite symphony, that day.
The room was small. It had a few lights and all of them were dimmed. She stood there, right in front of the mantelpiece. She had just finished lighting the candelabra which he loved the most and placed it on the table, near the deck. The music filled every nook and cranny of the room. She smiled coquettishly and he smiled back too.

He came closer and inter locked his fingers with hers. Holding by the waist, he took her to a different land...to their cloud-cuckoo land. The symphony was their swing and they both took a ride on it, tasting all the dreams they had weaved together. She swirled around. She was proud and happy! Like a painter’s brush, he moved her artistically. She was his muse and he was carving the most beautiful work of art. The music was going through their each and every nerve. It was all over. It was ubiquitous. Curtains draped on the sides of the window, the floor beneath them, greyed walls all around, played the concerto. It was their time and they both began losing to its beauty. Everything appreciated their love. The whole aura genuflected to its invincible purity and divinity. A new song was being made. A song which could heal a bleeding soul, caress an unloved heart and splash colours to a dried life. Their moves, their feelings and their love were striking. It went on. It never faded. And like their last dance, their love lasted forever and beyond eternity!!

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P.S : Do listen to the above link!!
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25 comments:

  1. maithiliMay 27, 2011 at 10:43 PM

    wow..this is simply beautiful.. I just felt lost in this song of love :) this is one of the best prose I have read I can rightly say :)

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  2. VinatiMay 28, 2011 at 12:53 AM

    thank you so much, Maithili..!! :)

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  3. DivyankMay 28, 2011 at 2:33 AM

    beautiful! u have a way with words.one could really sense the passion in this article..

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  4. VinatiMay 29, 2011 at 2:17 AM

    *a big fat smile*

    Thanks a lot, Divyank!!

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  5. The Solitary WriterMay 29, 2011 at 4:09 AM

    graceful..:) you don't know how much i got into this.You never cease to make me proud dearie. I rate you amongst the best of the writers :)

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  6. VinatiMay 29, 2011 at 2:48 PM

    Wow...Chacha Nehru..I'm so gald to see you here. And thank you so much. It really means a LOT to me. =)

    yay!!!

    Do come back! :)

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  7. Blasphemous AestheteMay 29, 2011 at 9:50 PM

    Interesting read. The dance steps and the closeness of two lovers, reminds me of the song by Don Williams, Dance, like no one's watching. (On You tube :P)

    Really nice read.


    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  8. VinatiMay 30, 2011 at 2:44 PM

    Thank you so much!! :)
    And for that youtube thing....I'm taking it as a compliment. :P :)

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  9. SMay 30, 2011 at 6:02 PM

    Beautiful, intense and soulful :)

    Are you into dancing; Salsa or Jazz? Somehow your words and that video made me curious to know this.

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  10. AMMay 31, 2011 at 1:54 PM

    wonderful read... glad to have stopped by :)

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  11. RachitMay 31, 2011 at 3:24 PM

    Soothing, beautiful and lovely... three wonderful words to describe one amazingly interesting post. wow :)

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  12. VinatiMay 31, 2011 at 9:06 PM

    @Sourav...

    Thank you! :)

    And whoa..that was a wild guess! I am into dancing. I have learnt both Salsa and Jazz and a few more dance forms along with Kathak. :)

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  13. VinatiMay 31, 2011 at 9:08 PM

    lines n shades...

    Thank you so much!! Hope to see you around more often. :)

    Take Care!

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  14. VinatiMay 31, 2011 at 10:56 PM

    Thanks a lot, Rachit!!

    It feels great to receive such wonderful appreciations from my readers. :)

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  15. phaticharJune 1, 2011 at 11:55 AM

    You know, there was a very interesting form of art once - a vocalist would perform, and a painter would paint to that tune, right there on stage. The outcome would be breath-taking at times.

    This post reminded me of that, as I was reading (and listening to the music). Thanks for the nostalgia - wonderfully evoked. :)

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  16. VinatiJune 1, 2011 at 3:15 PM

    Oh wow..that's interesting!! Thanks for telling me about it.
    I'm glad that you liked this post! :)

    Thank you!

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  17. Amnn.......//1!June 1, 2011 at 5:26 PM

    a lil girly in the end ,,don u think ??..!!
    but saucy ,!!!
    post realli drags u in ,,!!
    i liked it ,,

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  18. VinatiJune 1, 2011 at 11:41 PM

    Well it's ought to be girlie..you see :P

    Thank you so much for dropping by and sharing your views! :)

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  19. SJune 2, 2011 at 5:30 PM

    Nice! It was not a wild guess, actually I was into Salsa too and your post made it too apparent to me :)

    You are from Delhi? Okay, this would be a wild guess too you took your classes in GK II? :p

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  20. VinatiJune 2, 2011 at 6:20 PM

    Not all your guesses would turn out to be true! :P :D
    Well.. I'm from Noida and I did not take classes in GK-2

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  21. SJune 3, 2011 at 2:02 PM

    You see one never entirely knows. We guess, blankly at times. We may be wrong, but we take leap after leap in the dark ;)

    And yes, I'd sent you a message over fb, chatting here doesn't seem such a good idea! :p

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  22. deepsJune 5, 2011 at 8:26 AM

    That’s sweet n romantic..
    Perfect rendering for a love-ly duo in love

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  23. VinatiJune 5, 2011 at 5:37 PM

    @deeps

    thanks a lot for sharing your views!! :)

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  24. SaiJune 24, 2011 at 4:21 PM

    Awesome. . . The post mad me visualize and feel the situation...

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  25. VinatiJune 24, 2011 at 4:32 PM

    @Sai

    Thanks a lot for dropping by and following my blog! :)

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