Monday, July 18, 2011

Strings.


Laced up together
Materialistic strings
Beneath Love's veneer.

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Written for: Haiku Heights
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14 comments:

  1. CookieCrumbsInc.July 18, 2011 at 1:02 AM

    Where is the damn 'LOVE' button when you need it!

    Simple but beautiful.

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  2. JingleJuly 18, 2011 at 5:47 AM

    love it, smart Haiku.

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  3. AnonymousJuly 18, 2011 at 6:25 AM

    Very nice!

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  4. Red HandedJuly 18, 2011 at 11:18 AM

    Why cant i write this way

    aptly put.

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  5. VinatiJuly 18, 2011 at 4:20 PM

    @Priyanka
    That is so sweet of you! ^_^

    @Jingle
    Thanks a lot. :)

    @beccagivens
    Thank you. And thanks for dropping by. :)

    @Mystical Skeptical Me
    I'm so glad. :)

    @Red Handed
    I'm sure you can. It ain't that tough.

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  6. Live2cherishJuly 18, 2011 at 5:42 PM

    Love the illustration with it.

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  7. AnonymousJuly 18, 2011 at 6:54 PM

    This is really awesome love it!

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  8. Ramesh SoodJuly 18, 2011 at 7:50 PM

    YOu are telling a truth.. good one..

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  9. Vinay Leo R.July 18, 2011 at 8:30 PM

    Simple, straightforward and very nice :) Loved this, and Priyanka's response to it too :D

    Thank you for the support to Haiku Heights through the first year :) Looking forward to enjoying more of your haikus next year too!

    My Haiku ~ Break Free

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  10. The Write GirlJuly 19, 2011 at 6:16 AM

    Your words speak volume about the kind of lover you are describing. Nicely written.

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  11. Blasphemous AestheteJuly 21, 2011 at 7:16 PM

    beautiful :)

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  12. MakkJuly 23, 2011 at 11:06 AM

    Feels like you quiet like laces. :)

    Nice one.

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  13. VinzJuly 24, 2011 at 10:16 AM

    Loved the way your portrayed 'materialistic strings'

    Nice haiku..!

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  14. VinatiJuly 25, 2011 at 4:44 PM

    @Dishita
    =]

    @mindlovemisery
    Thanks. :)

    @Ramesh Sood
    Hmm....thank you!

    @Leo
    I'm glad to be a part of Haiku Heights. :)

    @The Write Girl
    Thanks a lot.

    @Blasphemous Aesthete
    =]

    @Makk
    I liked the thought of using them in my work. That's all. :)

    @Vinz
    Thank you! :)

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