Friday, November 18, 2011

Traversed a Vacuum.

Up I went. A little too relaxed.
Swayed like a piece of music,
Under the handsome sky.
Your eyes nattered,
For you were all spellbound.
Baby, I was high. And I loved it.

Up I went. In a vacuum.
Peace abounded.
It made me lose restraints.
It made me drop inhibitions.
Nothing was real.
Nothing was a dream.
Something peculiarly beautiful was all over me.

Up I went. A silhouetted figure of your love.

___________

Lady in Red - Chris De Burgh


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17 comments:

  1. CяystalNovember 18, 2011 at 8:44 PM

    Up I went too, while reading this post.
    Your posts make me dizzy. Like I'm high on grass or something. x)

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  2. aakashNovember 18, 2011 at 9:55 PM

    cupid seems to have struck again...
    enjoy the flight though :)

    aJ

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  3. VinatiNovember 19, 2011 at 6:57 PM

    @ Crystal

    Haha...really do they? ^_^

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  4. VinatiNovember 19, 2011 at 7:00 PM

    @ MSM

    Yay!! I'm so glad you are mesmerized. :)
    Thank you dher sara wala, Lady! ;) :*

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  5. VinatiNovember 19, 2011 at 7:05 PM

    @ Aakash

    Who needs a cupid when you have other means? :P

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  6. RahulNovember 19, 2011 at 7:23 PM

    i wish u a smooth landing tho... :-)

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  7. VinatiNovember 19, 2011 at 8:15 PM

    Thank you Rahul. :)

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  8. PhilO♥November 19, 2011 at 10:51 PM

    Up I went, and I was high :) Lovely!
    I love Lady In Red :D

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  9. VinatiNovember 19, 2011 at 11:55 PM

    Hey thank you so much!! :)

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  10. RHYTHM AND RHYMENovember 20, 2011 at 3:20 AM

    I loved your post and the Chris De Burgh video . That song was a favourite of my husband's brought back many memories.

    Thanks for the visit and the lovely commments. I have one book already published and one coming out in Dec/ Jan.

    Take care.
    Yvonne.

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  11. Rahul BhatiaNovember 20, 2011 at 4:59 AM

    Very expressive poetry and passionate too... Liked it immensely!

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  12. ShrutiNovember 20, 2011 at 12:15 PM

    Interesting analogies.

    And trust me, being high is the closest to unrestricted happiness u can get!!

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  13. ASNovember 20, 2011 at 1:28 PM

    beautiful description of trance :)

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  14. VinatiNovember 20, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    @ Yvonne

    I am so glad you liked it. Considering the fact that you are an author with two books in kitty, it's a huge honor to get appreciation from you.
    Thanks a lot! :)

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  15. VinatiNovember 20, 2011 at 2:04 PM

    @ Rahul sir

    Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

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  16. VinatiNovember 20, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    @ Shruti

    How true! =)

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  17. VinatiNovember 20, 2011 at 2:07 PM

    @ AS

    Thanks a lot. I'm glad you liked it. :)

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