Tuesday, December 6, 2011

Refill the void.



Empty the darkness.
Blow out the drab. Make space for
The worthy desires.

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33 comments:

  1. NehaDecember 6, 2011 at 8:09 PM

    This is a beautiful haiku, loved the first line "empty the darkness". :)

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  2. VinatiDecember 7, 2011 at 12:38 AM

    Hey Neha!

    Firstly, welcome here. I'm glad to see a new face around. :)

    And secondly, thank you so much for your lovely feedback! I'm glad you liked it. :)

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  3. Balqis DBJDecember 7, 2011 at 3:55 AM

    You expressed it so well. Loved this Haiku. It's beautiful!

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  4. RHYTHM AND RHYMEDecember 7, 2011 at 4:55 AM

    This is beautiful I really loved reading it,

    Yvonne,

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  5. ChandanaDecember 7, 2011 at 10:25 AM

    Nice one! :)
    Its amazing how three simple lines can convey so much!

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  6. CяystalDecember 7, 2011 at 3:48 PM

    Very worthy, indeed.
    You're the haiku queen, jaan meri :P

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  7. VinatiDecember 7, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    @ Balqis

    Thanks a LOT! And considering the fact that you yourself do amazing Haiku poetry, it's no less than a pleasure to receive your positive feedback. :)

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  8. VinatiDecember 7, 2011 at 5:13 PM

    @ Yvonne

    I'm all pleased to know that you loved it! :)

    Thank you! :)

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  9. VinatiDecember 7, 2011 at 5:14 PM

    @ Chandana

    Hey, thank you so much!
    Simplicity has always allured me. :)

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  10. VinatiDecember 7, 2011 at 5:15 PM

    @ Crystal

    You are a sweetheart. And I love you a lot! <3

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  11. Rahul BhatiaDecember 8, 2011 at 5:13 AM

    Very good! So much in so few words!

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  12. Red HandedDecember 8, 2011 at 11:57 AM

    Beautiful HAIKU. why am I not gifted enough to think so ebautifully :(
    Loved it

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  13. phaticharDecember 8, 2011 at 2:06 PM

    wonderful bein' back..

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  14. VinatiDecember 8, 2011 at 10:51 PM

    Thank you so much Rahul sir! I'm pleased to know that you liked it. :)

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  15. VinatiDecember 8, 2011 at 10:53 PM

    Red, I seriously think have no idea what amazing talent you have within you. You can lighten up anyone's heart just by your words. It is a BIG thing. Be thankful, silly! :* :)

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  16. VinatiDecember 8, 2011 at 10:57 PM

    @ Phatichar

    So good to see you after AGES!

    Hope you will not go invisible again. :)

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  17. Inspector SaahabDecember 9, 2011 at 10:02 PM

    stumbled upon this art work, i could just say, it's beautifully penned. i'm not good in reviewing art but i do mean what i wrote :)

    p.s : interesting name i got, for the blog or the url or my pen name? hihi

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  18. VinatiDecember 9, 2011 at 10:09 PM

    Hey thanks a lot!! I'm pleased to know that you found it beautiful. :)

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  19. Inspector SaahabDecember 9, 2011 at 10:11 PM

    BTW i'm not sure if i've told you about this but i really like your header.
    creative enough :)

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  20. VinatiDecember 9, 2011 at 10:14 PM

    Now you have. THANKS! :)

    But credits goes to deviantart.com

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  21. Inspector SaahabDecember 9, 2011 at 10:25 PM

    until this time i have changed my header for i believe more than 5 times and for the time being i'm gonna stick to the owls one. but i might change it anytime. never satisfied. HAHA

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  22. Cassiopeia RisesDecember 9, 2011 at 11:47 PM

    A lovely Haiku.....


    Melanie

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  23. RahulDecember 10, 2011 at 12:17 PM

    is it that simple????:-)

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  24. VinatiDecember 10, 2011 at 3:26 PM

    @ Inspector Saahab

    Choosing a header is indeed a pain in the ass. I too used to be confused about it until I came across the present one. :)

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  25. VinatiDecember 10, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    @ Melanie

    Seeing you after a long time. I'm glad you found it lovely. Thanks a lot! :)

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  26. VinatiDecember 10, 2011 at 3:28 PM

    @ Rahul

    It is. Because life is what you make it!

    Thanks for dropping by. :)

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  27. SuruchiDecember 12, 2011 at 1:07 AM

    Beauty in brevity!
    This is a nice and bright love filled space!:-)

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  28. --December 12, 2011 at 6:30 AM

    Lovely haiku and image to accompany it! Out with the darkness, in with the light :)

    I've missed your last two posts in my reader so I best take a look at it again ~ lately it's been doing this on a regular basis :(

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  29. VinatiDecember 13, 2011 at 11:31 AM

    @ Suruchi

    Aah..smart line. :)

    And thank you so much for the appreciation. ^_^

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  30. VinatiDecember 13, 2011 at 11:45 AM

    @ Fiona

    Thanks a lot for your lovely feedback. It means a lot. :)

    That is bad! I hope it's fixed soon as I can't afford to lose my favorite people here in this blog world.

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  31. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 17, 2011 at 9:11 AM

    mind blowing.

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  32. Maggie Patti Barbara Frankford-WaltonDecember 17, 2011 at 9:12 AM

    invite you to join poets rally and share a random piece of your poetry today, best.

    Smiles.

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  33. VinatiDecember 17, 2011 at 7:03 PM

    @ Promising Poets Parking Lot

    Thank you so much for your kind words. :)

    I'm off to your blog now!

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