Saturday, January 21, 2012

Loosen Up a Little. Pretty Please?


Oust the fret outside the gates
You look better with that killer spark.
Embrace all that I have to make you smile
For your smile surpasses the darkest of the dark.

*****

Picture source: wehearit
Current song: Send me an angel by Scorpions.

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19 comments:

  1. CookieCrumbsInc.January 21, 2012 at 1:05 PM

    This applies directly to me right about now:) Very sweet <3

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  2. Confused SoulJanuary 21, 2012 at 5:34 PM

    Awwieee sweet :D

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  3. the other side of meJanuary 21, 2012 at 6:14 PM

    yeah really sweet..love the second and the last line the most :)

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  4. KeirthanaJanuary 21, 2012 at 8:51 PM

    Very very sweet :) Loved it so much..

    Cheers,
    Keirthana
    http://keirthana.in/blog

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  5. Blasphemous AestheteJanuary 22, 2012 at 12:48 AM

    What can I say? Everything, title, pic and the content, it's beautiful!

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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  6. Amit CharlesJanuary 22, 2012 at 3:53 AM

    liked the last line the best.

    keep it goin;)

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    1. VinatiJanuary 24, 2012 at 9:01 PM

      New here right? WELCOME!!

      And thanks for the appreciation. Means a lot.

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  7. Rahul BhatiaJanuary 22, 2012 at 4:11 AM

    Vinati, those were beautiful words..

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    1. VinatiJanuary 24, 2012 at 9:03 PM

      Thank you so much for your lovely comment. :)

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  8. PhilO♥January 22, 2012 at 11:02 PM

    This was amazing :) I loved the picture!

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  9. ChandanaJanuary 23, 2012 at 9:42 PM

    Beautiful as usual! You are amazing when it comes to short poetry!

    ♥ www.thegirlatfirstavenue.com

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  10. Balqis DBJJanuary 27, 2012 at 6:14 AM

    So beautifully written! Let me quote "..your smile surpasses the darkest of the dark." Wow! loved it. :)

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