One sense of belonging
Satiated up to the brim
And I remember standing with a bottle.
When my vision jailed the starred silver
With its shyly placed charm
Overpowering the entire gray.
And then I got the calibre to construe.
What that one night had to say.
That, what I knew, was novel and true.
That, it isn’t always dark after all
When I lived, it was luminous
And that it left me with an impact so infectious.
In the final analysis, it impeded the emancipation
It impeded the opening of doors.
For I repel falling from the myriad vistas
Into the actual nothingness.
Into the actual nothingness.
For when I live a dream, I make it my reality.
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I never knew the feeling to strike off more than one entries on the bucket list, until now.
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This post of yours is so different than others that i have read so far. To my engineering mind, the words repel, impede, calibre, luminous, analysis etc.. just pop out and i have lost what you could have meant here and have started relating to some phenomenon.
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DeleteI just played with words. XD
WoW! Beautiful and profound writing! I always think of you and Crystal being in the same 'league' of exquisite writers :* Loved the image too!
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DeleteTHANK YOU SO MUCH!!
I like your stance, living a dream and realise it. That's really nice! And your poem is awesome. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot dear! :)
Deletenice read :)
ReplyDeleteThank you!! =)
DeleteThe calibre to construe.
ReplyDeleteWork of a genius, aint it? :)
And you are a sweetheart. Ain't you? <3
DeleteBeautifulll Mirage :D Loved every bit of iiiitttt..!
ReplyDeleteLoved the title. EVrybody should abide by it.
TWISHAAAA....thanks a lot!!!! :* =D
DeleteBaap re, dictionary/thesaurus leke baithna padega aapke posts ko padhne :P
ReplyDeleteWonderful, as usual. :)
Hehe...so you can be funny too huh!! :D
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DeleteToo Good Sweethrt..you have adorned this poem with words and aww i am so happy.Sorry I had been too busy these days .So I have decided to take some time and read all your posts.. :)
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ReplyDeleteYayayayayayay.....THANK YOU BADA WALA!!!!! :D