Countless whispers,
Lurk in the shadows.
And the deep slumber on your chest
With stealth,
Dissolve in your charm and aura
Essay an attempt,
To shut down the tempest.
For what I carry,
Is perhaps a want, a desire!
Of jagged affection
Sweet and sour
Of ugly touch
With no folly bar
And the chord,
The one that is very gentle
Strike it with a mysterious mirth.
Shut the doors,
Descent in my arms
And let elation take its impending birth.
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I do so love your poetry, the words are wonderful and the message comes across to the reader.
ReplyDeleteYvonne.
That is so kind of you. :-)
DeleteA beautiful depiction of the feeling of love, affection and the elation that goes with it!
ReplyDeleteThank you sir. :-)
Deleteyou convey thing so beautifully. I love :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a tonne miss <3
DeleteAstounding. From child-like mirth, to thoughtful musings about the world, to opening the jammed door, to finally shut it. Di'verse' this is...And what choice of words! You've come a long way.
ReplyDeleteNext? :)
Next is more refined me.. :-)
DeleteWhen are you coming over to the bhoot bangla? :P
DeleteHehe!
DeleteArey I took a temporary respite from the Bhoot Bangla na.
Shall be back soon. =]
:O Did you really mean the 'over and out' thingy back there???
DeleteSay "no", please.. :P
YES I DID!!
Delete*no face palm* :P
woww.. beautiful darling.. :)
ReplyDeletetake care
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Thanks a lot Raniyal! :-)
DeleteThe last line was like the cherry on top. This was beautiful. SO beautiful :')
ReplyDeleteAlso, loving the blog header :)
Hey...that is really kind of you dost. Thanks! :-)
DeleteEssay an attempt to shut down the tempest. Or maybe just let it be. And watch it while it unfurls itself :)
ReplyDeleteYou make my head twirl, make it dance around in circles. :-*
I don't know why this reminds me Yellow by Coldplay. Maybe you remind me of my favourite things. <3
PS : Get back on Facebook. I have to stalk you. :)
Aww...Tum chup chap puchie lo bas!!!
DeleteAnd yaar...Facebook has taken a back seat for now. I shall be back after umm...let us see. Even I don't know, Stalker! :P :-*
Thank you Zeba. :-)
ReplyDeleteI got no words to define the beauty of the emotions you've brought together jaanemann.
ReplyDeleteMesmerising, absolutely..!! :*
Ohooo...dhattt :P
Delete:-* <3
sahi hai jee..Poet ban na hai kya? :D
ReplyDeleteI'd rather prefer to be a poetess. :P
Deleteoh, i just woke up and your words are making me dreamy already :).
ReplyDeleteHehe... So should I feel good about it? :D
Deletespell-binding! :D completely entrancing :)
ReplyDeleteYou are just being too kind sweetheart.. :-)
DeleteNice poem..have u done this sketch?..its lovely!
ReplyDeleteNo, I haven't. :P
DeleteBeautiful.. every single time.. :) goosebumps.. overwhelmed!!
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