Sunday, July 15, 2012

In Me, The Universe.

The endless journey
The endless quest has begun
Here is the first step.

I see a mirage.
That which keeps me going forever
Someday, I will reach.

There, right there. Because
That is where the quest will end
In me, the universe.

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Written for: Haiku heights
Picture Source: weheartit

28 comments:

  1. Endless quest...I believe we are all on one....searching for one thing or another....lovely words

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    1. True! And before one thing is achieved our quest takes another direction, resulting in an endless journey. However, in the end, what matters the most is deep introspection.

      Thanks! :-)

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  2. I loved ur thoughts! Very very beautiful.. i like the line on ur header of the blog too!

    First peek of loving future

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  3. Indeed! "For life is a quest and the walk is on"!

    Beautifully written! :)

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  4. Endless quests and endless pursuit of mirages is what this life is all about!Very true!

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    1. Sir, your appreciation has motivated me constantly.

      Thank you so much! :-)

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  5. Lovely thoughts...I too believe in the universe in ourselves ~

    If you will permit, in haiku form:

    seed the road
    of wheat, rice and corn,
    fields of gold

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    1. :-)

      What a beautiful haiku. You have got some real talent Grace. :-)

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  6. Wow..what an amazing piece of work sweetheart..!!

    Your post leads me to the assurance of possibly making
    the quest/dream, end/fulfill at some point of life..Mirage..!!

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  7. Frankly speaking I haven't yet figured out what a haiku is...Nevertheless, lovely thoughts.

    Cheers
    CRD

    Do visit mine

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    1. Haiku is a poetic form owing its origin to Japan. It is composed of three lines. The First and the third line have 3 syllables and the middle one has 5. So it's like 3-5-3.

      It is one my favorite forms. Thank you for showing interest. :-)

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  8. Nice thought and really nice set of haiku!:)
    (There's additional that/which in the second haiku)

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    1. But it is grammatically correct.

      Thanks a lot for dropping by.. :-)

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  9. Lovely. All of life on earth might be a mirage of our own perceptions.

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    1. Possible. :)
      And mutual beliefs form our reality.

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  10. Lovely set of haiku...very beautiful an interesting thoughts..:)

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  11. Lovely thought..
    I also wrote few lines in hindi...
    "jab door ho koi tabhi ahmiyat samjh me aati
    Hai.. Jaise marubhoomi me pyase ko pani ki aas satati hai"

    I hope u understand hindi.. :-)

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    1. That is a beautiful composition. Thanks for sharing it.. :-)

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  12. It is always a delight to read your comments MSM. I feel so motivated...every single time. Thank you!!

    Means a lot! :-*

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  13. Lovely, I guess I connect to your theme very easily as it is close to my heart and writing!

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    1. Thanks a lot Jaideep.

      It's good to see a new blogger around. :-)

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  14. Because it has always been mutual. <3

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