Comet Muse: Prompt: Wilted

Sunday, September 15, 2013

Prompt: Wilted

hazy sunshine

brimming over the

wilted daisies

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4-5-4 pattern

Written for: Haiku Heights

9 comments:

AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 12:49 AM
Sad!
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AnonymousSeptember 15, 2013 at 1:01 AM
Great image, great haiku!
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LocomenteSeptember 15, 2013 at 11:58 AM
Nice imagination :)
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Sumana RoySeptember 15, 2013 at 2:33 PM

superb start and beautiful images........
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Ridx September 15, 2013 at 2:42 PM
You are making me interested in Haiku. :)
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Gaurang RaoSeptember 15, 2013 at 5:42 PM
Poor daisies. Couldn't manage the heat like you've wonderfully managed the topic. Amazing.
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Balqis DBJSeptember 15, 2013 at 7:43 PM
A beautiful take on the prompt. Well-written! :)
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Ramesh SoodSeptember 15, 2013 at 8:04 PM

My smiles
spill over
this haiku..

RS:)
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joanneSeptember 16, 2013 at 1:43 AM
feeling the humidity that can wilt the flowers...
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