The last lingering
breath of the night
ruffles through
my cascading hair,
carrying the scent of
waters and cold sand.
You nudge me,
You nudge me,
on the shoulder
and break my trance
To bid goodbye
to moon glade
as the dawn
gradually devours.
as the dawn
gradually devours.
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lovely as always! The imagery is really nice :)
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DeleteZaroor!
DeleteSuch a delicate little poem :)
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DeleteThanks Anisha.
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ReplyDeletethis is beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteYour words are so vivid and beautiful, they caught me in a trance. :-)
ReplyDeleteSo sweet of you Irene
DeleteSo beautifully written! Loved it. :)
ReplyDeleteThanks a bunch Balqis
DeleteThat was awesome. And thanks for stopping by my blog.
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