Wednesday, January 22, 2014

Fun Resides With the Odd.

Not the dizziness
which follows the kiss

Not the echoes of familiarity
which lingers in this mind

I want the devil's heart
Corroded yet colorless,
For I never desired a hero or a knight.
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  1. PratikshyaJanuary 22, 2014 at 9:42 PM

    http://pratikshya-magicmoments.blogspot.in/2014/01/my-first-blogger-award.html

    I have passed on the 'Dragon Loyalty Award' to you.

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    1. VinatiJanuary 24, 2014 at 1:02 AM

      That is reallllyyy sweet of you.

      And the name 'Dragon Loyalty' is so cool.

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  2. kayla January 22, 2014 at 10:52 PM

    i want that devil's heart too.

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  3. Ankita January 23, 2014 at 12:23 AM

    awesome words..i just love reading your poems :)

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  4. SoumyaJanuary 23, 2014 at 12:24 PM

    I've never desired a hero too. I like a bad boy. Always have, always will.

    Married to one too :D

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  5. Red HandedJanuary 23, 2014 at 2:21 PM

    Brilliant this is!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
    I want a dark heart !

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  6. Blasphemous AestheteJanuary 23, 2014 at 7:38 PM

    And yet you seek to deny all what only a devil may possess.
    Ask for a saint's heart instead, because that is what is asked for in every line except last.

    Beautiful verse! :)

    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. VinatiJanuary 24, 2014 at 1:13 AM

      :)
      That is how a woman's mind work. Sometimes a saint satiates her and sometimes only a devil's heart suffices.

      P.S: I enjoy reading your feedback.

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    2. Blasphemous AestheteJanuary 25, 2014 at 3:35 PM

      Read closely, I seldom lie. :-)

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  7. PreetiJanuary 23, 2014 at 9:01 PM

    Just landed here from Red Handed's blog..Very very very nice poetry! :)

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    1. VinatiJanuary 24, 2014 at 1:15 AM

      Hi Preeti.. :)

      I'm so glad you liked my work and my blog. Thanks a bunch!

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