And then he stopped tracing for a while,
the seamless chaos of her twisted mind.
Everything quietened
the howling of dogs,
the chirping of sleepless birds
and the night sky.. it stayed
like a blank thought hovering without words.
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the seamless chaos of her twisted mind.
Everything quietened
the howling of dogs,
the chirping of sleepless birds
and the night sky.. it stayed
like a blank thought hovering without words.
_______
so interesting. reading this i feel like there are at least 3 more layers beneath the words.
ReplyDeleteWritten words keep the imagination open. I feel so good you that could read through the lines. :)
DeleteSheer beauty! I hibernated in this phase for a long long time, sometime back.
ReplyDeleteIt is kind of peaceful and unsettling at the same time.
Deletenice words!
ReplyDeleteThank you so much Natasha. :)
Deletethis is really good! really enjoyed "the seamless chaos of her twisted mind" - excellent stuff!
ReplyDeleteComing from you Freya, it makes me feel so happy. Thank you!
Deleteit's as if i can feel that emotion of expectancy. beautiful as always love xo
ReplyDeleteThankyou!!! And also for getting in touch again because I'd almost lost you.
DeleteSeriously, How do you accommodate so many levels in your writing! Such a talent.
ReplyDeletexox
DeleteIt's just old me growing into a new me.
The last line blew my mind!
ReplyDeleteI love to do that. :D
DeleteHow do you even get such ideas? Too good.
ReplyDeleteThat was just my twisted mind working.
Deletemaybe there's something in our souls no one can really reveal.xx
ReplyDeletedreaming is believing
Let's keep that something unadulterated and just for ourselves. :)
DeleteThis will keep me awake for a while now....I like this verse a lot.
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like it. :)
DeleteYou are so kind with words.. :)
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