which stands tall and proud
somewhere in the meadow,
we will hush to sleep
the monsters of our mind
and get wild
within the silence
and drowsy smell of summer,
somewhere in the meadow
till the stars show up
and carve galaxies
beyond the lustful vision
lithely bringing alive
our old and sunken
and rusty dreams
somewhere..
in the wild meadow
we will elude
the daunting lies
and crazy shit
you and i..
we'll come to life
at the very juncture
where the world stops spinning
where the mess fades
out of our little picture,
we'll come to life
in each other..
somewhere in the meadow.
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Mmm this is delicious, I really love it. "We will hush to sleep the monsters of our mind and get wild within the silence." That's effing brilliant.
ReplyDeleteThanks love! :)
DeleteAww. This is such an intimate poem. <3 Absolutely beautiful.
ReplyDeleteKeeping the dreams alive, I wonder for how long it can be done.
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For now, let's keep the questions aside and continue dreaming. :)
DeleteAhh how do I want this to happen...That the world spins and the mess fades out of my little picture..and I can just live without any pretense
ReplyDeleteLovely as always...You come up with something beautiful every single time!
Yay!
DeleteA positive feedback can do wonders. :D
Such a love sappy poem. I love these kinds since I am sucker for romance. Very beautiful. The way you ended it
ReplyDelete" we'll come to life
in each other..
somewhere in the meadow."
made me go Awwwwwwwwwww clutching my heart.
Haha.. yeah a little too mush. Uffff!
DeleteThat was a love dream woven with words, Vinati:)
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you like it. =)
DeleteThis poem speaks not words but sings emotions ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteThat is so sweet.. thanks! :)
DeleteBetween wrongness and rightness there is a field. I will meet you there.
ReplyDelete~Rumi
Find.
Blasphemous Aesthete
That is one of my personal favorite quotes. :)
DeleteSo you're saying that my work reminds you of Rumi? Okay I'll take that.. :D
lovely, so glad to have found this x
ReplyDeleteHi Maija
DeleteI'm glad you like it.. thanks a lot! :)
i jst am so happy to find ur blog ^_^ beautiful :)
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DeleteThank you so much Sachin. :)
Coming here for the first time. This one is beautiful :)
ReplyDeleteShukriya! :)
DeleteSummery... And so full of longing...these words have a life
ReplyDeleteI'm glad you could feel the emotion. :)
DeleteSo beautifully done :-) .
ReplyDeleteThank you! You are so sweet.
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