drifting summer breeze..
she drinks his favorite tea
by the lone window
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It feels good to write haiku after so long. This beautiful form of poetry will always be one of my favorites.
Written for Haiku Horizons
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:) you've said so much in those words! Beautiful!
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot for such kind words. :*
DeleteWish he were at her side to share the cup of tea as well as the happiness. But guess not all things go the planned way...................
ReplyDeletenicely expressed.
True.. but love lingers in longings too.
DeleteThank you for dropping by. :)
Beautiful :) Haiku is definitely challenging and you have done it so well :)
ReplyDeleteThank you so much for appreciating the effort. ^_^
Delete'HIS FAVOURITE TEA'
ReplyDeleteMade all the difference! Beautiful!
Thankyousomuch! <3
DeleteHaiku is one of my favorites too! I love your usage of words, always! :)
ReplyDeleteThis love.. it's mutual! I'm a fan of your work. :*
Deletehaiku's are beautiful, this one anyway.xx
ReplyDeletedreaming is believing
Thank you Niki =)
DeleteA nice way to feel his presence...
ReplyDeleteBy sipping his favorite tea...
I could feel her love and loneliness...
Thank you for reading. :)
DeleteYou made every word count in such a beautiful way. Good one~
ReplyDeleteThat is so nice of you. Thanks!
Deletei really loved this mirage. i love how much you are able to say with so little. you have inspired me to learn more about haiku :)
ReplyDeleteThanks love.. you must try this! I am sure you will pull it off. :)
DeleteBut haiku is really addictive.. which is why I took a long break from it.
I love the romanticism here. I hope she is not waiting for long...I hope they are reunited.
ReplyDeleteI hope that too. :)
Deletei have to read twice ! his/her.....and then woosh ! the frog jumps ! its a masterpiece !
ReplyDeleteYour comment made me so happy.. comparing my work to Basho's, I'm thrilled! Thank you :)
DeleteHeart in love seeks comfort in fond memories... wonderfully expressed!!
ReplyDeleteThank you Reshma.. :)
Deleteoh, i love this one! how just a few words can mean so much..
ReplyDeleteThat is the best thing about haiku.
DeleteThanks love :)
I am incapable of being that short and concise, it takes skill and you got it. Nice.
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind. Thank you Ryan for appreciating. :)
Deletei agree with your comment above that haiku is addictive...
ReplyDeletebut i should be so lucky to have it as one of my many vices
xx
LuLu
Breakfast After 10
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DeleteThank you for reading Lulu.
I could never write a Haiku that I'm proud of. This one is beautiful. :) Also, I do agree with what you wrote about society. Thank you for passing by.
ReplyDeleteThat is so kind of you. Thank you Zeba!
DeleteI cannot afford to miss your posts.. :)
Enlighten me a bit more on Haiku please?
ReplyDeleteHey there
DeleteHaiku is a traditional Japanese form of poetry. It has three lines and usually follow the pattern of 5-7-5, as in first line has five syllables, second- seven syllables and third- five syllables. Haiku can be written to describe any 'aha..' moment :P It could be related to nature as well.
You should try it!
yes haiku!♥
ReplyDelete..this is lovely btw
Thanks Ivette :)
ReplyDeleteahaa!
ReplyDeletewhat a pleasure to read you and haiku after ages!
Dishitaaaaaa!!! Where were you??? I though I'd lost you.
DeleteHow have you been?
Now this surely is wow ... loved it :-)
ReplyDeleteYay! Thanks.. :)
Deletethis sunny breeze,
ReplyDeletethat hot tea,
this lone window
that humming bee..
this empty chair
that fluttering leaf,
this lonely her
that heartening grief!
i knw i knw nt that gud.. still :)
That is quite a thoughtful comment. :D
Deletethat was d intention.. :p
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