Because it was the night that whispered endearments in my ear instead of your beautiful mouth and scented sighs, it was the surging silence that implored to be hugged by the midnight love instead of your arms that once found their place around my slender frame. It was a sinuous moment unfaithfully bent at the juncture when it all fell apart, a wilted nonsense of caricatured dreams meekly dissecting our little heads. But I stayed.. stuck and dispersed like saline words on our abandoned sheet; reminiscing the jaded moments, the lost kisses, the discarded hugs that fluttered across the burnt pages while you rebuilt the night's charm with a wistful start and an open end.
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I stayed stuck on your words.*sigh*
ReplyDeleteYou are SO SWEET. :*
DeleteBeautiful... But I stayed.. stuck and dispersed like saline words on our abandoned sheet.. Wow...
ReplyDeleteThaaaankyou A!
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DeleteThis is beautiful! Especially the last two lines <3
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Thank you sooo much, Nirati =]
Deleteyou use such beautiful words :)
ReplyDeleteThank you, love.
DeleteThis is really beautiful x
ReplyDeleteThanks Maija.. =)
DeleteTHE PAIN...I had to read this thrice.. BEAUTIFUL...Its aches!
ReplyDeleteIt so does!
DeleteSo glad you liked it. :)
"a sinuous moment unfaithfully bent at the juncture when it all fell apart". *sigh*
ReplyDeleteThanks for reading.. :)
DeleteOuch, open end! Breaks my heart, it is that beautiful.
ReplyDeleteThank you, Soumya. <3
DeleteWooooooooow ... this is what you call a beautiful play of words ... metaphorical and deep ... awesomeness :-)
ReplyDeleteYou are so kind! Thank you. :)
DeletePoetic prose, Vinati:)
ReplyDeleteI wrote it as a poem but later changed it to prose. It felt better this way. :)
Deleteoh my goodness... i loved every line.
ReplyDeleteAw, thanks love!
Deletewe always stay don't we? xx
ReplyDeletedreaming is believing
Yes! We are sucker for love and we always stay.
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