Tuesday, September 30, 2014

Prompt: Home


september morning
mist on old window panes
winter comes home
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Written for: Haiku Horizons
Picture source: pinterest

P.S: I haven't followed the common 5-7-5 structure.. just.. like.. that! ^.^
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35 comments:

  1. Vaga BondSeptember 30, 2014 at 4:36 PM

    Outstanding blog girl, at such a young age...you should be proud of yourself !!! :) 3 cheers :)

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    1. VinatiSeptember 30, 2014 at 10:08 PM

      Thanks a lot for your super generous words.. :D

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  2. Ankita September 30, 2014 at 5:17 PM

    Even without the 5-7-5 rule, this haiku is very sweet!

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    1. VinatiSeptember 30, 2014 at 10:09 PM

      Thank you Ankita.. it is kind of relieving to ignore the rules for a while.

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  3. SoumyaSeptember 30, 2014 at 6:43 PM

    Such a pretty picture you paint :)

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  4. kayla September 30, 2014 at 7:46 PM

    mmm so good. i've missed you, i've missed your words so dearly.

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    1. VinatiSeptember 30, 2014 at 10:11 PM

      Kayla!!! Where have you been? I couldn't access your blog for so long. Hope everything is okay at your end.

      I've missed you too! Thank you for dropping by.

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  5. NikiOctober 1, 2014 at 12:48 AM

    so simple but meaningfull.xx


    dreaming is believing

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  6. rallentandaOctober 1, 2014 at 6:24 AM

    Beautiful !

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  7. AnonymousOctober 1, 2014 at 6:58 AM

    Nice Haiku and image

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  8. HardiOctober 1, 2014 at 7:40 AM

    I'm glad you didn't follow it, this is perfect :)

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  9. Rahul BhatiaOctober 1, 2014 at 1:26 PM

    So much said in so few words:)

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  10. AnonymousOctober 2, 2014 at 3:27 AM

    you don't have to follow the 5-7-5 so long as you capture that moment :)

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  11. Amrit SinhaOctober 2, 2014 at 3:29 PM

    Welcome winter :-)

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  12. SueQOctober 3, 2014 at 5:33 PM

    I loved the imagery. <3 Thanks for writing a d sharing it. :-)

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  13. AnonymousOctober 3, 2014 at 10:13 PM

    Ah. I see it as well as feel it in your haiku and photo.

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  14. Balqis DBJOctober 4, 2014 at 3:36 AM

    Beautiful! The words are well-crafted. :)

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  15. Blasphemous AestheteOctober 4, 2014 at 12:06 PM

    An offer, either don't do prompts, or don't tell me that it is a prompt. :-)

    Cheers,
    Blasphemous Aesthete

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    1. VinatiOctober 5, 2014 at 1:22 PM

      Haha.. why so? Prompts make it challenging.

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  16. VinatiOctober 5, 2014 at 1:23 PM

    Main bhi!!!

    So much love for you and winters.

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  17. Jyotsna BhatiaOctober 5, 2014 at 10:36 PM

    Beautiful !!

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  18. KeirthanaOctober 14, 2014 at 5:00 PM

    I can't find words enough to convey how much I love your word plays. Brilliant!

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