Monday, March 30, 2015

Prompt: Sleep


midnight thunder..
the black murky night
twitched in sleep
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4-5-3 pattern

Written for: Haiku Horizons
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9 comments:

  1. AnonymousMarch 30, 2015 at 6:10 AM

    i love the images you give the reader. I had no idea that a haiku could be anything other than 5-7-5.
    Have an awesome week :)

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  2. rallentandaMarch 30, 2015 at 9:34 AM

    Interesting take on sleep in the big city....evocative...loved this !

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  3. PratikshyaMarch 30, 2015 at 10:09 AM

    Impressive haiku.. :)

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  4. Rahul BhatiaMarch 30, 2015 at 12:56 PM

    True, that is how it is:)

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  5. Ankita March 30, 2015 at 1:26 PM

    interesting!! and the pic is lovely too :)

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  6. Vandana SharmaMarch 30, 2015 at 4:13 PM

    still, so much peace in sleep...lost in dreamworld

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  7. AnonymousMarch 30, 2015 at 5:21 PM

    Wonderful haiku.

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  8. AliceMarch 31, 2015 at 2:54 AM

    To sleep is to dream. Very nicely done.

    https://alicekeysmd.wordpress.com/2015/03/30/join-silent-flight/

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  9. Amrit SinhaMay 28, 2015 at 10:48 PM

    Midnights are soothing and musical :-)

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